This was the first erotic story I ever wrote, and as such, it needs some trimming and adding. Unexpected Appointment only took me an afternoon to write--it just kind of flowed out of me--so it's pretty raw. I was in a hurry to share it (not always a good thing for a writer) and didn't take my time to let is sit before I re-editted and then posted.
It's been about six months since I lasted looked at it, and I'm ready to polish it up. I think I want to send it to a publisher, so I'll also need to take some of the 'questionable morals' out of the story. But don't worry, it will still be hot. *wink*
